Chapter Eleven

A new novel in the making.

A New Novel in the Making

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The Creep

Caroline and Fred stand by her locker in the school corridor, indifferent to the noise of all the other students moving about around them. Caroline picks out a few books to put in her bag. Fred is empty handed. He peeks into the interior of her locker, with books in no particular order and some well-worn notebooks. When he notices the R.E.M. poster on the inside of the locker door, a little smile passes on his lips. Immediately his face returns to the grim expression it had before.

"For nine months?" Fred asks with an aggravated voice. "That's ridiculous! Who can hide in a house for so long, without being spotted?"

"Well, last night he was," Caroline replies, keeping her voice lower. "In my bed."

"Did he try something?"

"Nothing like that. But he bit me. Look!"

She turns the side of her neck to Fred, who inspects it closely and touches it delicately, not wanting to stop. He can see no marks, but continues the inspection anyway.

"I can't see anything."

"You have to look really close. There are two small marks, right on my vein."

Fred leans in very close and gently drags his fingertip along the vein.

"Maybe they already healed."

"Or maybe there's not enough light here," Caroline suggests. "They were there when I checked this morning."

"Anyway," Fred continues, "what a pervert! Does it hurt?"

"I can't feel a thing. I thought he kissed me. But he bit me and drank my blood."

"He drank your blood? Really? That's just insane."

"Well, he said so. I don't know. The marks were so small, not at all like bite marks. And if he bit my vein, wouldn't there be blood all over?"

Fred keeps staring at her neck, until she turns away.

"I think it's a homeless kid," Caroline continues. "You know, sleeping in the streets. Maybe sometimes in our house. I found no trace of him in my closet or anywhere else. But still, he might have been there, now and then."

"The creep!"

"If he's a runaway for nine months or more, he must be in big trouble," she says with some concern.

"I say he is!" Fred says with a dark voice. "I wish I'd get my hands on him."

He ties his hands into fists and his lips form a downward curve.

"I don't want you to hurt him," Caroline blurts out, putting her hands on Fred's fists and lowering them. "But I do want you to help me catch him."

© Stefan Stenudd, February 2014

Chapter Twelve

All the chapters posted so far:
  1. Light and Dark

  2. Mumbles

  3. Don't Touch

  4. Not a Word

  5. Swings

  6. He Talked to Me

  7. Was It Quick?

  8. Flossing, Too

  9. The Lower Canines

  10. Two Dots

  11. The Creep

  12. The Goth Stuff

  13. Nine Months

  14. Like a Rat

  15. Morning

  16. Some Things Take Forever

  17. If He Doesn't

  18. One Little Thing

  19. Another One

  20. Playing It Safe

  21. The Netherworld

  22. Never Grow Old

  23. It Sounds Trite

  24. Dying Is Terrible

  25. Just Kids Playing

  26. He Didn't Know

  27. Maybe the Only One

  28. I Don't Hear It

  29. Honesty

  30. Secrets

  31. I Care

  32. Treacherous Longevity

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